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Angel Lael's Exile by KoushakuX Angel Lael's Exile by KoushakuX
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This comic is so old it's actually quite embarrassing to show off. In my eyes it's so poorly drawn with it cheesy writing I canít help but smile when I read it because Iíve improved so much since then. It took a few months to do and it was done for a book in my Illustration class. Also the book was published so please don't try to steal it and pass it off as your own.

If there are spelling or gammer errors Iím sorry but I donít really care.
Program: Flash CS4
Tools: Line tool, Paint bucket, Wacom Tablet
There are blurs, glows, and gradients, all other this piece.

Assignment: 4 page comic on any subject matter.

Story: This story is about a young authority angel named Lael who was kicked out of heaven for breaking a rule she forgot about. One of her friends another but older authority angel named Fiel came to warned her but it was too late.

All angel are supposed to stay within heaven with the gate closed not hanging out near the edge with the gate open. She was gazing at a mysterious lake with a beautiful serpent like creature in it. A higher ranking angel, a dominion angel, named...hmm letís call him um...Atmose (yeah, that'll work) caught the young angel in the action and announced her a sinner which will in turn have her be banished.

Fiel, her older friend, tries to resin with Atmose but it is to no avail a. He reminds her of her place and that he is a higher ranked angel and that sin will not be tolerated in heaven. With this she was to be kicked out of heaven. Fiel upset by this takes action and attacks Atmose. As far as Lael knows her only friend let her be kicked out right infront of her. At this very moment Lael has fallen into the late she gazed upon so many times before with this larger than life creature.

What happens next you ask? Lol maybe not, but the teacher only asked for four pages so that all he got.

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Underlined back story or trivia:

Probably not suitable for strong religiously sensitive people. You have been warned.

Authority angels are angels built for combat once governed by a rebellious angel known as Lucifer. They were also the cops of heaven. In my story are prejudiced against for this reason. He was the first angel to ever be banished from heaven. Also because of this the authority angels were all stripped of their wings to make an example of them. Although Fiel being a model Authority angel was given fake substitute wings to use in combat.

Lael like Lucifer is an angel born (which is rare) with black hair (which is even rarer). Being Angel after all this she still has her wings nut never was able to make friends because of her hair. She also, was never able to make friends with the other authority angels because she was allowed to keep her wings. The only one who accepted her was the authority angel Fiel.

Dominion angles are known to be quite beautiful who tend to carry some kind of staff and regulate what need to be done in vast areas. They are not known for there combat. Atmose being able to watch many areas at once was easily able to notice what she was doing but let it slide several times.

Laelís real name is actually Lucy and she is the daughter of the Lucifer. Only the higher up know of this and the lake she was so fascinated about was the Lake of Hell guarded by the creature who is one of the Hell kings known as Leviathan.

Their situation in the end:

Fiel for attacking Atmose is now the enemy of heaven and will be swarmed with angels and Fiel is about to enter the same place her father, who is now also a Hell king, was sent to when he was banish. She is also at the mercy of its guardian Leviathan as her anguish grows.
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xChemicalEMBalancedx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
I wonder why your characters are even at this level.....hmmmm ;P
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Alluxa Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
did you design everything?
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KoushakuX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Lol yep :)
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Alluxa Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I truly wish you continue this this is a very good story :icongoodjobplz:
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KoushakuX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
OH, wait, I mixed up I mixed up your comments lol. I wouldn't mind continuing it actually. I just might continue it at some point.
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KoushakuX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Yep, I do a lot of character and concept designing.
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Alluxa Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Youre very good at it.
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KoushakuX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :aww:
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